Napoleon Complex





Napoleon Complex is a state of being overcompensated for one's short height, especially men.


i need you guys' help.
this is the 4th illustration for my thesis, and Gary said it would be better if i crop it like the second image so that the viewers can see the legs right away,I thought it's a great idea but after i cropped it, it looks kinda awkward to me..and I do not know which one is better....

9 comments:

  1. Sohyoungkim11/04/2009

    hey
    i like the one that is not cropped..
    i kinda like the way you rendered the face and hair.. its true that the legs are emphsized when its cropped, however..i think it doesn't have to be focused on the legs.. the idea can be depicted in a subtle way..:)

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  2. Kassem Ahmed11/04/2009

    i think gary is right ... u dont need the top at all.
    it crop even further ( in the middle of the women's shoulder)

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  3. anjo11/05/2009

    i like it cropped. their heads might distract viewer's attention abit...if i didn't know about the topic at first i might think it's about two people falling in love from the expression on their faces..perhaps change their expression to emotionless?
    as for cropping...i might even crop some more from the woman's side...to make it tighter or something...hahahaha sorry hun i'm not really good at compositions and stuff....but but but i love you! hahahahahhaa

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  4. YooJin Guak11/05/2009

    thanks a lot guys!!!

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  5. YooJin Guak11/05/2009

    Guys, i cropped it more like Ahmed and Anjo said. and i sent my images to Gary for megacrit, and he said he wants to crop it better! haha. good news. so i will see the result on our megacrit. yes. lol

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  6. Nat Janin11/05/2009

    aww I was going to say to crop it just above the girl's jawline. That way you don't get distracted by facial features, but you still acknowledge that they have heads.

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  7. Sam11/05/2009

    i like the cropped version too :) i know u already sent it to gary, but i think u can get an even closer crop to make sure all the focus is on the legs because they are beautifully drawn.

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  8. Sean11/05/2009

    The only thing I was thinking about the cropping was making the figures larger in the space so maybe crop in closer on the sides as well?

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  9. YooJin Guak11/08/2009

    thank you for your input guys!!! :)))

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